Wrinting a fictional story. I need readers to check it 4 me.

[riotgear66]

I am writting a story. Just for kicks. I picked up a pad of paper and pen and started writing. I do not know where the story is going but I would like some people to read it and let me know what I need to work on as a writer and what my pluses are.
Leave me some posts if you are interseted in reading it Ill email it to who wants to read it, it short. Then post it on here after I get some critiquing.

[shannadawn (deleted)]

`emailing them, when you just got here, probably isn't cool. better to post a link.

[dart2009]

Yea man. You'll get a whole bunch of rapists. LMAO. But yea post a link. I write fiction myself, sometimes.

[shannadawn (deleted)]

`wasn't exactly the angle i was coming from, but yeah...could happen ;)